at the lab the general came too look at the lab and found more of these projects still waiting to wake up
general: kill them all they won't have a chance to live
soilder: but sir their not like kara and they can't stand bullets like her
general: they might be and we can't let any of them leave them leave this place alive
so he did what he was told he shot all of the tubes that had the projects and left the room
solider: sir so how are we going to kill kara or capture her she killed are best men
general: we'll have to see i think it was darkria how made her that way but we don't know how if darkrai comes and finds her it might bring chaos
back with kara and lucario they were sleeping kara woke up and forgot that lucario was beside her he felt her getting up
lucario: kara where you going
kara: go just getting a drink
lucario: i could get it for you
kara: not i can't het it myself
lucario: i know you can be i think you need to rest more
he and kara both went in to the kitchen lucario wanted to know what really happen that night
lucario: kara what really did happen
kara: lucario you already know what happen
lucario:but kara i don't think those guys will leave what really did,,
kara: I KLLLED THEM OK ?
lucario: WHAT ?
lucario: was shocked
kara: its just they....
lucario: cuz you wanted to protect me
that wasn't going to be her answer but she didn't want lucario to be afread of her he hugged her
lucario: thank you for saving me
kara didn't know what to do tell the truth or lie
ok i need to make the stories longer i keep on making them short
It also needs to be a bit more descriptive.
It needs a bit of space between each dialogue...my first story was about this long...and it was good so you can still have a short story and still have a masterpiece.
i know but most of my other ones are longer then that
Yeah they are.
i don't know why i made them short all of a sudden but i am trying to get myself to make them longer then they are now
yeah good idea, more would be know cuz I remember you wrote one scene and it was more rebuilded
yup, try add more to the chapters,cuz the action in every one is short. example Kara's thoughts, worries, reflections or so.
yeah i know i don't know why i make them so short i'll tyr to make it longer but should she tell lucario the truth or lie to him ?
well she should tell him the truth cuz I will be better for her then bee with him and lie all the time. I she loves him and wants to be with him she must tell him, it will be easy for her.
but she's scared that lucario would call the cops and turn her in or tell her to get out of his life